Some people argue for a broad university education in which students learn about many different subjects. Others argue for a specialized university education in which students learn only about a specific field of study. Which position do you agree with? U

There is no doubt that education is important for students future and career. Without education, students lack the information and the skills to pursue their ultimate goals and achieve their dreams. Although some people presume that broader university education is important for the students career, specific field of study is more important in my opinion. The basis for my views is because specialized in certain skill is more required in market, more cheaper and less time consuming.

There is no doubt that having a broader knowledge important for us as a general. People should have different information in different field for their benefits. For instance, students should possess basic mathematics, science, and physics to observe and perceive their surrounding. However, nowadays, companies are looking for employees who are knowledgeable in specific filed or who are experienced in certain skills. For example, Google looks only for students who are astute in mathematics and computer science. Hospitals aim to hire doctors and pharmacists. Possessing the right information and being able to perform a specific skills augment students' job opportunities.

In addition to the previous point, studying special subjects or field is far less expensive than studying broader subjects. for example, Universities charge 500 dollars for each subject. If students study only two or three subjects per year, they will pay 1000 or 1500 dollars per year. Yet, they still have all the privilege that university offers for their students. Students can enjoy a free access to university library, low-cost dental and medical insurance and discount bus tickets. However, Students who study more than three subjects per year they are enjoying the same privilege, but with more financial burden.

Finally, study specifics filed is less time consuming than the broader ones. Giving that finishing one or two subjects could take up to one year, studying for several subjects could take far more time than students expected. Nevertheless, the burden that study carry for the students like stress, exams anxiety and sleepless night.

As a conclusion, we can say that broader studies have some benefits on students life. However, being specialized in a certain field can have a significant effect on students lives not only information wise, but also mentally and financially wise.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272946859903 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.140096618357 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106280193237 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0410628019324 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0289855072464 0.0685040099705 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0410628019324 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73313454779 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169082125604 0.0309702414327 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0024154589372 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193236714976 0.0209618222197 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144927536232 0.0139019557991 104% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2378.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 369.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44444444444 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417344173442 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.363143631436 0.251872472559 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.271002710027 0.174417080927 155% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138211382114 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73313454779 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525745257453 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.2449204619 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7727272727 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1582945021 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 53.0870904164 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.02298850575 1.45489161554 139% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248067452664 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0903755793263 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0777508444908 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474444866888 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141096991553 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888206771685 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542581152473 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264621240119 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119868892139 0.067059652881 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150976390935 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409767652108 0.0618886996521 66% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Sentence: There is no doubt that education is important for students future and career.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and future

Sentence: Although some people presume that broader university education is important for the students career, specific field of study is more important in my opinion.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and career

more cheaper
cheaper
much cheaper

There is no doubt that having a broader knowledge important for us as a general.
There is no doubt that having a broader knowledge is important for us as a general.

Sentence: As a conclusion, we can say that broader studies have some benefits on students life.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and life

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1947 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.276 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.633 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.142 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5