Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past because of a lot of problems we face during our life. While many people believe that view a challenging situation is helpful for personal grows, others agree with obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, I think veiw a challeinging condition can be usefult to people. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, imagining of challeng help people to know their capabality and talent, which help them to realise their positive and negative characteristic aspects. This is obvious that papole are different, and act different in each situation. Thus, each person with knowing his weakness can focus on it to find out a solution for this, to face dramatic problem. For example, students at high school learn how to prepare themselves for future problems. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I had been studying at high school, there was a course in how to put down your anger during challenges. The teacher learned us how to know about situation, and how to act when we are facing the problem. During the test, I underestood what is my weakness, so I decided to solve my problem and be strong. After while, when I was angry about a situation I performed the methods that I learned before.
Forthurmore, knowing about situations help us to know that our life is not always in peace. In fact, with imagination of situations, we learn that there are something that can effect our life. Some of this events are very dramatic such as: Divorce, losing parent, war, unemployment for long time, and losing children. Although we need serious aid during this situations, we have to learn how to face with this challenges. For example, I lost my job last after five years working on the great project. Because of losing my job all my time and energy seemd to be wasted, but I knew about unemployment, and I was prepared myself for this situation. Thus, the next year based on my experience I create my own compony.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that people should veiw the challenge and focus on personal grows, which is very importantby knowing weakness, and be optimistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79895561358 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72131060896 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545691906005 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.19256749 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5238095238 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230463268116 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653155504681 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789602730019 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15667434571 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610226437305 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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