Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student. Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience. Which view do you agree with and why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Along with the developing society, people are getting more easily to obtain advanced education. In order to catch up with the soaring demand for education, more universities and colleges show up. These educational places are mainly marked two different parts in size, large and small. As a result, an argument between choosing the large school or the small ones gains more concern.
Personally speaking, I would choose the large universities. The first reason is obvious that the environment for study is better in large universities. More students around mean more helpers in study and life. For example, I was once an extremely ingoing person with little talk with others as well as my grades cannot improve in the case of my fear with talk. The situation above was my status five years ago which was awful. However, everything bad is changing the first year after that situation. I went to a senior school with size large and population huge. I started to talk with the others for help because if I am not doing so, I would get myself separated from the party. Since then, my ingoing situation changed, and I got better grades as well.
Some people may think that small universities have more teachers to care for the students, so the learners can have better educational experience because of that. It is true that caring would be more with more teachers accompanying small number of students. It would not enhance the educational experience, however, can in part lose the experience. Students, especially in college and universities, are going to face social pressure on their own with little help from someone like advisor. Dealing with social activities and finding resources on their own is the key.
In the larger university, there are much more different majors, professional teachers and advanced facilities. Therefore, if students attend this kind of university, it is highly possible for them to choose more courses that are not related to their majors as larger universities can provide more optional courses. In the meantime, it is not uncommon that the more professors the larger universities have, the better studying experience the students have. Undeniably, because larger schools have sufficient fund to purchase teaching devices, students can use the facilities more frequently in library, sports, arts and laboratory. Moreover, great minds think alike, which means that to choose the larger university is helpful to enlarge the social circle.
To put it into a nutshell, with all the evidence mentioned above, we can justifiably arrive at the conclusion that in order to enjoy a better educational experience, students should choose the larger colleges or universities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19221967963 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75466404428 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528604118993 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6775484257 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5416666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316530846988 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801695025852 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672000883789 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171671449816 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396484644777 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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