Giving a glimpse into our modern society, people care more about which kind of university that can have a better educational system. They wonder whether attending smaller colleges is a better choice than choosing larger universities. Personally, I give my vote to the larger one, especially when comprehensive factors are taken into consideration.At the first place, choosing the larger colleges is beneficial to gaining abundant educational resources. In the larger university, there are much more different majors, professional teachers and advanced facilities. Therefore, if students attend this kind of university, it is highly possible for them to choose more courses that are not related to their majors as larger universities can provide more optional courses. In the meantime, it is not uncommon that the more professors the larger universities have, the better studying experience the students have. Undeniably, because larger schools have sufficient fund to purchase teaching devices, students are able to use the facilities more frequently in library, sports, arts and laboratory.Moreover, great minds think alike, which means that to choose the larger university is helpful to enlarge the social circle. Explicitly, students have realized that larger schools can meet different kinds of talents and actively participating in more activities and courses may enable them to be exposed more schoolmates who have distinct hobbies and interest. What is more, with more funds that the larger university provides, no one can deny the possibility that the larger universities have the financial ability to organize activities with other schools and even send parts of excellent student to study abroad. Hence, not only can the student cultivate friendship with students in the same school, but also they can enlarge the social circle with students from other schools. Knowing more friends is quite a wonderful journey in the education experience.Finally, to study in the larger university is a better option in hunting a decent job. Since larger universities either obtain more supports from the government or experience quite a long time to develop, they have already cultivated a large number of famous teachers and gained a stable reputation in the society. These advantages definitely help students who decide to study in the university to improve their professional competence. After that, students will have more opportunities to get excellent internship and find a good job. Nevertheless, the smaller university not only develops slowly or lack of enough teaching resources, but receives less influence in the society. Therefore, for students studying in the smaller colleges, they have to seek jobs by their efforts rather than equip with the schools’ reputation to help them. To put it into a nutshell, with all the evidences mentioned above, we can justifiably arrive at the conclusion that in order to enjoy a better educational experience, students should choose the larger colleges or universities due to getting better academic performance, making more friends and having a good career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03518419478 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523012552301 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1008456777 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.647058824 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359430864019 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129469906285 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570787399544 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359430864019 0.150856017488 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 58.1214874552 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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