Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In 21 st century, study is more harder and competitive than past. Students need vacation as a break from this academic burden. Some people believe that students should have one long vacation while others think short vacations are better. In my view, I agree with that students should have short vacations throughout the year. I choose this way because two concrete reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, by taking long vacation, students will get distraction from their academic study. They will struggle to refresh their mind after long break like a month. But it would not be distraction if they will take a break such one week. My own past experience is a compelling example of this. When I was 12 year old, I had a long vacation of one month in high school. We had year system rather than semester system like university program. I went with my family to Pune, a different state than my state Gujarat. I could enjoy myself with family, but after coming back and starting high school class again, it became a chellenge for me. I could not remember science and math equations. So I had to take extra tutor to understand that concept again. In contrast, when I was in University of Gujarat in Master program, we had a short vacations. We had semester system so we were given only short vacations. I thoght those were enough to be entertained and study back again. This example shows how short vacations are better than long vacation.
Besides, students will get more entertainments if they should be given many and short vacations rather than long one vacation. They can expose themselves in different activities if they have many short vacations. They can enjoy music concert, movie show and shopping in short vacations. These short vacations are more than enough to enjoy their hobbies. My own past experince examplify this. When I was in school of internation, I had one long vacation from May to June in summer. I spent 15 days with my friends, but other 15 days I was bored. It was like my waste of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, so, while, in contrast, in short, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77889447236 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46832922754 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477386934673 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1326527651 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.3548387097 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8387096774 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83870967742 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459649062561 0.236089414692 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126696093959 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17260330313 0.0737576698707 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.421029253481 0.150856017488 279% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.327400206628 0.0645574589148 507% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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