Nothing could be more important than healing your soul after a long period of commitment. The longer the commitments the longer the healing process would be. Nonetheless, it's been intensely argued whether students should be given a long vacation each year or several short vacations through the year. Some people may disagree with the fact the students need a long time off, other may have a negative attitude. If I were forced to choose one of the positions, I would stand with the former for two main reasons.
First, students can work during a long time of vacation. A lot of students can't afford the expenses of colleges' tuitions and fees, so by giving them the chance to work at the summer; it would be a great opportunity for them to save some cash. For instance, a few years ago, when I was in my high school, I had always dreamt about being a dentist, but there was one huge obstacle in my way, which was the cost of the attendance. My parents were teacher back then. However, they couldn't afford it what so ever. Fortunately, my school gave the chance to follow my dream. Every summer, we had a long vacation that I took advantage of and started looking for jobs. One day, one of my neighbors came to me and said," I heard that you are looking for a job, right? Guess what, I have gotten one for you". She offered me to baby set her daughter with good amount of payment, and that helped a lot to save my dental school. As you can see, giving the students a long vacation could help them to save for their dream university.
Second, a long vacation would relief the students' stress and release their negative energy. Some of the recent studies have proved that. For example, a few days ago, I came across an article from daily science, which was about how long our brains need time-off after 8 months of serious and hard work. The researches found that we need at least three-month vacation to be able restart all over again with fresh soul and relaxed mind. They also found; people who took long vacations are able to be creative more than whom didn't. This article taught me about the significance of recharging you ourselves every one in a while.
In some, though some people may agree that schools should give the studnets long holidays, other may not. Long holidays not only would heal the students' soul but would help them to attend their dream school. Every school should give consider giving the students along vacation instead of short ones for their own benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, second, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59192825112 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3171970481 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535874439462 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0694596919 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.92 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.84 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314021088467 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858834431394 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809348092836 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214303957154 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764454280705 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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