people attend college and universities for many different reasons
Nowadays, more and more people attend universities for different reasons. According to the survey, the main goal of what most of them do so is career preparation.
There are many reasons to demonstrate it. The most primary reason is that, the university is the most suitable spot to absorb knowledge, which is mostly determines your career development. With the development of society, "knowledge is the power" has been a rule: the more the knowledge that one possesses, the more easily he succeeds in his career. For instance, it is often reported that MBA graduates in famous universities, such as HARVARD, will acquire high start payment when the companies employ them for the first time. Furthermore, after several works,abundant working experience and solid knowledge base will make them further develop in the manager class.
Anther reason is that, universities will provide one with not only knowledge but also with different abilities, including communication ability, corporation ability and in-dependency ability. For example, he can make friends with his schoolmates and deals with all kind of people, who often become his colleagues or business partner in the future. Furthermore, in this way, his view will be widened and his abilities will be improved. When he goes off the campus, he always will have a stronger competition ability than those who don't go to the universities.
Last but not least one is that in contrast, history illustrate that people refused to go to the universities have few opportunities to succeed in their career development. Because of their low educational level, most companies would rather employ them as physical workers than mental workers. In this way, the development of technology will fall them into disuse.
Such as in many manufacturing factories now, there are automatic machines substitutes for workers.
In a word, of many reasons for people to go to universities, career preparation has been the most primary. When education background becomes more important in career development, it will attract people to do so for along period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , abundant
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34337349398 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04557694084 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5635586995 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.352941176 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244191197084 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877829103655 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104550345985 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142334354982 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712562096652 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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