Human beings need friends in all stages of their lives, and there are two ways to have friends, staying with an old one or trying to make new friends. Personally, i believe its more beneficial to make new friends rather than staying with one old friend. I feel this way for two reasons.
The main reason is that, i get to experience and enjoy new things.I get really bored when i hang out with same friend over and over again but when i meet up with new people all that boring goes away. For example, couple weeks ago, when i was in my last trip to USA, i met a good friend at the library her name is elizabeth. Elizabth is a very out going person, she would never visit the same place twice. we discovered a-lot of things together. For instance, she took me to the nature museum at Iowa City as well as the downtown where we enjoyed eating out at a Moroccan restaurant. We didn't only hangout but also we have been to the shelter house where we volunteered to assist people to get food, clothing, bathing and laundry facilities. I would never in million years think i would go to this place.This experience especially taught me lot about generosity, caring and loving for whom in need.
Second reason is that, making new friendly relationships will definitely expose us to multiple new opportunities.In order to get new job or promotion, you should be sociable and friendly person. For example , few days ago, my friend omar was telling me a story about his friend who was desperate to shadow with pediatric cardiologists. Fortunately, i happened to know a pediatric cardiologist who was my new friend ahmad that i met when i was at a coffee shop with my brother and his friends. Immediately, i sent him a note that i have a friend who is in need of shadowing at your clinic , he was more than welcoming. I got back to ahmad and delivered him the great news. He couldn't believe what i was telling him, he kept screaming and saying thank you so much for this opportunity. I felt so happy for him. As you can see, meeting with new friends could really grant people with wonderful chances.
In sum, though some people may oppose my opinion of always making new friends. Not only we will experience new things bout also we will get alot of amazing opportunities. Every one should consider expanding his friends' zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 22.412803532 277% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 419.0 270.72406181 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52267303103 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58498227585 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 145.348785872 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55369928401 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 3.25607064018 614% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.235544959 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2380952381 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249312570168 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749446425932 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876791803792 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169455388278 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946672522115 0.0443174109184 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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