It's been always said," knowledge is power". It's your authentic weapon against nescience. However, It's been always intensely argued whether the children should begin learning foreign languages as soon as they start school. Some people may agree that kids should start learning a foreign language as soon as they start school, others may have negative attitude. Personally, I think children should start learning foreign language as soon as they start school for two main reasons.
First, no body knows where he might end up living in. Of course, you don't know where you will live in ten-year from now, don't you? For example, I was born and raised in U.A.E, When I started my primary school, I had never heard of any language but arabic. Our academic classes and non-academic classes were all in arabic. As the days progressed, my dad got an amazing work offer in U.S.A. He was so excited about it, but we were n't. Me and my siblings were afraid, because we knew that we speak english at all; not even a single world. When we first arrived at U.S.A, we were literlay suffering; we couldn't understand what people were talking about, so we decided to join classes that teach english as a second language. At the beginning, it was hard on all of us. We even thought about going back, but we never gave up on ourselves. Finally after several years, we were not only able to speak the language but also we have become fluent. That story taught me a lot about the importance of learning a foreign language as young as we could.
Second, teaching kids a new language will cause them to be smarter. A lot of researches have shown that our brain is a muscle that needs to work out. The more intense the work out is, the more the muscle bump will be. For instance, a few days ago, I run through an article, which says that if a kid started learning a new language, this is going to strengthen his brain ability to comprehend, corporate and think. Also, the article says that it will also develop their imaginations and memory. These obtained abilities will cause him to improve his grades in school. As you can see, the great affect of learning a new language on the children's brains.
In sum, though some people may agree about the fact that kids should learn foreign languages as soon as they start school, others may not. In fact, learning new language will not only make our kids smarter but also will prepare them for the future. Every school should consider teaching new languages as soon as the kid starts kindergarten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65178571429 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38320531431 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.396714603 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153639460906 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434778306022 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052072685534 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972358454392 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434793632129 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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