Education
Education is the most important aspect of our lives. It is where we spend most of our times and many years learning and researching. According to the survey, more and more people nowadays attend universities to get help needed to develop their career.
The main reason is that, it is the most suitable spot to absorb knowledge. It always has been known that, " knowledge is the power": the more the knowledge the one possesses, the more the he easily succeeds in his career life. For example, MBA graduates of famous universities such as, HRAVARD, will acquire high payment by the companies when they are hired for the first time. Furthermore, after they obtain several works, development and experience they will attain not only higher payment but also endless promotions.
Second reason is that, you will improve you abilities in many fields, such as, communication,corporation and in dependency. Also, he will make new friends with his school mates who will be his colleagues or business partner in the future. In this way, his view will be widened and his ability will be improved. So when he goes of the campus, he will be a strong competitor. So as to acquire all these, university should not be a plan B.
Last but n't least is in the contrast, History illustrates that, people who didn't attend universities have few opportunities to develop their careers. That is because companies only hire them in jobs that required only physical abilities. Unfortunately, most of the these companies have replaced them with automated machines, it is much faster and cheaper. As you an see, attaining a degree from a university couldn't be more important.
In sum, though some may oppose my opinion, university degree will be a great addition to the student life. Not only will the addition develop his career but also the increase his abilities in may aspects. Every high school student should consider enrolling in bachelor major at the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99694189602 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90443254019 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1676701483 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0283808326842 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159587402342 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677072006329 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0238812778165 0.150856017488 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047762555633 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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