Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances, others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that being successful is of critical utmost important life goals for human beings. Indeed, people bend over backwards to reach success along with various trials and tribulation in daily life. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that in order to be successful people should take risks in their personal life whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. Due to the controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I ma, however, to a great extent of the conviction that make a sound decision and meticulous plan could guarantee being successful in near future. In the following paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, a plethora of people make an effort through hard work in order to experience success in their life. Some take risks other make plans, invest in stock market and so forth, but which ways could patronize people to reach success easier. Generally phrased, although taking risks may result in success, it might have deleterious effects on people's lives due to the fact that it enhance the likelihood of losing everything in life. As a matter of fact, make a precise plan for future not only can save everything like money and fortune but also can guarantee achieving success. Based on a study conducted in my country, myriads of people who made plans for their future have been successful owing to the fact that they did not something wrong and ensure their future life. To elucidate more on this issue, make plans meticulously will provide an opportunity for people to be sure about their success and will not overwhelmed by stress.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that making plans will terminate into trustworthy and integrity. To put it in other word, it is the most required and admired quality of all successful people around the globe. Indeed, the willingness and ability to trust people that you look up is absolutely essential to your ability to perform at your very best. Going into the depth, with trust and integrity you have nothing to fear since, you have nothing to hide and also, with trust you will do the right things so, you will have no guilt. However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, taking risks may provide fertile ground for people to become successful due to the fact that crowds of fortunes are unpredictable and no one could anticipate what will happen in near future. Nonetheless, it does not make those preceding advantages pale.
In light of reasons elaborate, I reiterate that taking risks and make a plan both play a dominant role in success but make a meticulous plan could guarantee people's success in future life. In addition, make a plan could resulted in trustworthy, which contribute greatly to successful people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'overwhelm'
Suggestion: overwhelm
...e sure about their success and will not overwhelmed by stress. Another reason that shoul...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...ity to trust people that you look up is absolutely essential to your ability to perform at your very...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ilt. However, what was alluded to above cant be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alo...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...re life. In addition, make a plan could resulted in trustworthy, which contribute greatl...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontribute greatly to successful people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, whereas, in addition, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99390243902 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64206612672 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516260162602 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4489056718 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256145446013 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884530436902 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639156451369 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177647313198 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388642042547 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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