In modern days, world become highly competitive and people become very busy with their jobs. Due to this fact, it becomes very difficult for parents to manage time for their children and whenever they can, they should have quality time with their kids. It is a controversial question that how the free time should be spent - by playing games or doing schoolwork? As far as I am concerned, I prefer to enjoy time with children by playing games at free time. To substantiate my point of view, I would like to present some reasons in following paragraphs.
The first thing that comes to my mind is to make childhood memorable. Childhood is the most precious period of a person's life. Parents would grow older day by day and happy times with them would only prevail at the end. As parents are very busy nowadays, a child might feel lonely and of course it is parents duty to manage some quality time with kids. Doing schoolwork at free time would not allow kids to be open at free time and they might feel pressure of study at that time also. Therefore, let the kids have some fun, by playing indoor or outdoor sports which would be beneficial for both his mental and physical health.
In addition, parents can also teach ideas to their kids while playing with them. There are so many things that can be used as a learning tool as well as playing. Using those items help mental growth of child with fun. For instance, recently my colleague bought a jigsaw puzzle for his daughter and at free time both the dad and daughter work together to solve the puzzle. After three long hours, they successfully build a castle, which makes the time very enjoyable and fruitful. Thus, playing with puzzle or chess or other tools can help kid to learn something and enjoy the moment with parents.
Moreover, a kid has to allocate much of his/her time for study. He/she has to attend study, finish his homework and attend exams regularly. A recent statistics conducted on our city shows that, most of the children suffer serious illness due to continuous pressure of study both in school and home. In school, teachers have the responsibility to guide kids with study and course work. Therefore, it is not necessary to involve parents with kids' assignment. Rather, they should be allowed to enjoy free time with kids by playing games without taking any pressure.
To wrap it up, every kid should have the opportunity to have some quality time with their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ldhood is the most precious period of a persons life. Parents would grow older day by d...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ght feel pressure of study at that time also. Therefore, let the kids have some fun,...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to tool'
Suggestion: to tool
...y things that can be used as a learning tool as well as playing. Using those items h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69373549884 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34165801699 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508120649652 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7609228568 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2916666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340815901645 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977438694134 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670268468214 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214467078104 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597647437244 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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