Some people choose to live in large cities, but other prefer to live in small villages. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond fact that humans require a flourishing environment for their settlement. Vividly, everyone is a creator of his own life. In this regard, people have no shortage of opinions on whether they crave to live in peaceful countryside, or they prefer to adopt a contemporary modern lifestyle. As for this writer’s opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea. In what follows, I delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that city life provides a plethora of activities. Life is never dull when a person is living in a city. People turn to feel motivated and come out of their depressed lifestyle in the city. To be more specific, there is no shortage of entertainments and enjoyments. By way of illustration, restaurants, theatres, museums, galleries, cinemas, parks, playgrounds, and many more. City life is more jubilant and enthusiastic. People are moving according to the pace of the modern world by establishing and advancing their lives. It is axiomatic that folks start to feel boredom in such a vibrant environment. on the other hand, individuals settling in the countryside deprive of all these luxuries.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that there are a vast variety of services and amenities. It is notable that with the advent of technology, people have progressed significantly in all the fields of their lives. Cities are advanced in educational institutes, medical facilities, transportation, agricultural and technological establishments. I want to mention a famous saying here, “the only constant in the technology industry is change“. It is crystal clear that as time will pass technological breakthroughs will enable the city’s services to reach skyrocket. Conversely, village life either doesn’t have these facilities, or they are in such limited amount that it doesn’t fulfill the purpose.
The last reason to elucidate my standpoint is associated with the notion that there is no shortage of employment because of all the factories and businesses. Since it declines the unemployment from society, and crime rates reduce significantly, as a result. Whereas people living in countrysides have to suffer because of employment; and hence, the crimes ratio is high there too.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that city life is far better than life in a small town or village. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: First, living in a city gives many entertainment options; Secondly, it presents many opportunities; Lastly, it diminish unemployment. As for this writer’s advice, I vehemently urge people to change their own situation and picture their life in an advanced setting of a city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as for, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27455357143 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21111497256 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555803571429 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9307560562 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8846153846 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141212594917 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318291506598 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322089922892 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742491889257 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180474653256 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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