Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the advent of technology and advancement in the world, society's infrastructure is entirely changed. In this regard, living a comfortable and luxurious life is of paramount importance. There is no shortage of debate among scholars on whether it was more relaxing to live in the past or it is more convenient in today's contemporary world. If I were asked, I would agree with the notion that living today is more comfortable and easier than in the past. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint. The first compelling reason corroborating my stance is associated with the idea that with medical advancement in today's world, people life is more safe and protected, unlike past. Certainly, multiple medical inventions have resulted in the cure of diseases that were considered life-threatening in the past. It is also worth mentioning that health professionals are more advance in their practices and, are actively participating in educating patients about communicable diseases. It is obvious that people feel safer now. By the way of illustration, about half a century ago my grandfather died of lung cancer in his forties. He did not even know that he had been infected with the cancerous disease because medical technology was not advanced at that time. On the other hand, my dad started to have a lung infection in his forties too, which was discovered to be genetic after medical examination. My dad got chemotherapies treatment, he was even lucky to get the lung transplant. Now he is living a healthy and comfortable life. He continually follows up with his doctor who teaches him that how he can improve the quality of his life even more. If my grandfather had that medical advancement in the past, his life would have been more comfortable but that did not happen. Therefore, my example manifests that medical technology has made present life more convenient.
The second exquisite rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that today people have more opportunities to progress and to be successful. Since present-day life has more education and learning opportunities, people get more advance in their lives. On the other hand, in past people's life was arduous because they had limited opportunities to progress and they have to struggle hard in their life. My uncle's case is a profound example. About two decades ago, My uncle had to work about 10-12 hours a day. After such strenuous work, he hardly took time for himself and his family. He did not even get vacations to enjoy and he had to spend his life on a limited salary. Moreover, he had no chance to improve his condition through education. On the other hand, I started working two years ago, after the first year of my job I got a promotion because I was able to finish my master's degree. On top of that, I just have to only work 8 hours a day. I got a vacation to enjoy with my family. Looking at my uncle, I feel more successful.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that living in modern-day life is easier. Not only people can improve the quality of life through medical breakthroughs, but also people progress in their lives through learning opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, i feel, by and large, by the way, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2697.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85945945946 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89450697063 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47027027027 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2464736928 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9032258065 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12903225806 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125165484432 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041647617159 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618501481353 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081674770221 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562835964361 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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