happiness comes with spending your money on others than spending on youlself
happiness comes with spending your money on others than spending on youlself
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the modernization and advancement on the globe, people living standards are immensly improved. In this materialistic world, everyone thinks that money makes mare to go. Not due to the reason what money itself is, but what money brings to folks. There are different schools of thought among people on this subject. Where some reckon that spending monetary values on themselves provides pleasure, others contemplate that consuming it for others results in eternal peace and happiness. As for this writer’s opinion, I would champion to the notion of gaining happiness through charity for others’ cause. In what follows, I will delve into most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my stance is associated with the idea that spending money on others is a way to express gratitude to God. To be more specific, it shows that God has provided oneself with the all the blessings and they are willing to share them with others. It is obvious that people belong to all paths of life in this world, there is no equal distribution of wealth and resources. IT goes without saying that wealthy is becoming wealthier and poor is getting poorer. The only way to eradicate this viscous cycle is through diligently considering the others needs too. NOt only it shows your thankfulness to God, but it also results in innumerable pleasure to the life. By the way of illustration, My dad always taught me to spend on others since I was a child. I always saw him giving charity to others and fulfill the others’ need. Thats the result, I never saw him complaining, he was always happy with his life and with others. My example clearly manifests that how sharing your wealth with others leads to happiness
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that when individuals take cares of other need, it brings contentments and satisfactions in their own life too. It is worth mentioning that its very easy to draw a grin on a sad hungry face just by donating some money. Where as some legends take it as purpose of their lives. their selfless deeds have saved the millions from hunger, drought, illnesses and many other unfavorable circumstances. For instance, Abdul Salam Eidhe who was a pakistani philanthropist and humanitarian he was the poorest rich man who compounded the foundation of world largest ambulance services and established many shelters homes for miserable victims. If we take a closer look at his life, he lives a mundane life far from luxuries. His bright face showed that his heart is in eternal peace and contended. He even nominated for a Nobel peace prize and won many other peace awards. If he had not donated all his wealth to charity and serves the humanity, he would not have been that peaceful.
By perusing above paragraphs, one can infer that if people selflessly spend their money on other it is of paramount importance. FOr the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating, First, spending money is a way of being thankful to God that increases your blessings. Second, It results in satisfaction in the individuals life and may bring fame to them. As for this writer’s opinion, I vehemently urge people to spend their money for charity purposes not because other will get happiness, but it results in their own pleasures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, as for, for instance, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2874.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 583.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92967409949 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72697820346 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514579759863 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.003932898 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1034482759 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1034482759 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13793103448 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367148678706 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862443239386 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118478614327 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343730266541 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.337256131614 0.0645574589148 522% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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