Everyone has dreams and goals in his or her mind. Different people choose different goals. Some of them prefer those ambitious dreams and goals, and others may choose to follow practical and achieving realistic goals. Personally, I would like to have more ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic.
First of all, ambitious dreams and goals can bring out the best in people. Just as the old saying goes, one's potential is endless. Challenging goals that are more difficult to realize can inspire people to keep working harder and give their best. Take The Wright Brothers as an example. The Wright Brothers used to spend a great deal of time observing birds in flight. And they had a dream of making a flying machine for human which was thought totally crazy by others. Over the next several years, they have designed a series of gliders and flew numerous test glides. In spite of all kinds of problems, the Wrights determined that they could fulfill their dream. Finally in 1904, they made the first airplane flight. If The Wright Brothers had more realistic and ordinary goals at that time, they would hardly achieve such success.
Moreover, following ambitious dreams can not only make personal progress but also prompt the development of the whole society. If Jules Verne had never written about space, air, or underwater travel, human could not soon have achieved air travel, invented practical submarines and devised practical means of space travel; If Martin Luther King had not dreamed of ending the racial segregation and discrimination, African-American would still live on a lonely island of poverty and discrimination, and civil rights in the United States and around the world would not be improved; If Bill Gates had not quitted from famous university and started his own enterprise, now we would not do our homework or even take examinations just through the computers. At first, all these ideas and goals were considered crazy and not realistic by most of people, but it is the ambitious and not realistic dreams open up a new era in different areas in our society.
On the other hand, both kinds of goals and dreams have advantages. It is true that people can easily gain more confidence when they focus on realistic goals and be less stressed. However, feeling too good about themselves may make those people satisfy with their current lives, and will never want to give up their secure lives. As a result, they will never make a breakthrough. Take my brother as an example. He does everything step by step following achieving realistic goals all the time, such as going to an ordinary university after high school graduation and finding a secure job at hometown when graduated from college. Every day he looks confident, but at the same time he loses the chance to feel a great sense of achievement forever.
All in all, challenging goals can not only motivate us to maximize our potential and attain more significant achievements, but also promote social progress. So I stick with the belief that focusing on ambitious goals would be a more beneficial choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...in people. Just as the old saying goes, ones potential is endless. Challenging goals...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ed that they could fulfill their dream. Finally in 1904, they made the first airplane f...
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Line 5, column 831, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e considered crazy and not realistic by most of people, but it is the ambitious and not realis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, such as, as a result, first of all, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94827586207 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58178776695 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.873808807 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.3461538462 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265910347063 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700232332118 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649000520565 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15316630805 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816520258448 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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