Nowadays, advancements in technologies and internet created different habits and ways of communication for people to share their moments and get in touch with friends and family, like myriad social media's developed for different purposes. While some people believe that posting pictures and information on social media is not good and will cause some troubles for the person, others disagree with this notion and think that it is good to keep records of our memories and share it with others through this novel media and way of communcating. I am personally of the opinion of the latter, and I will elaborate why I feel this way in the following paragraphs.
First of all, by uploading pictures and writing information on social media, we can share our moments with friends and family and stay in touch with them. In this way, our families and friends will know about us and we can share our moments with them, even if we are far from them, since technologies made it possible to get in touch with our parents and other people, when we are not close to them. For example, when we are living in another country, our families and friends want to hear about us and celebrate our achievements and holidays with us.
Second of all, we can keep our memories and they are available everywhere. When we keep our memories and experiences and upload them in social media, we can access them in the future. On the contrary, if we save it on local hard disks, our images and information would not be accessible from everywhere, also we take the risks of losing our precious moments and pictures if this hardware device gets infected or break apart completely. My own story is a compelling example of this. When I was in university, I stored the whole university experiences and pictures, which were very precious to me, on my hard disk, but after a while, this hard disk broke and I lost all those images and now I do not have any images from that period of time. So, if we keep our images on social media, not only we can keep them safe, but also we can access it from everywhere.
To put it all in a nutshell, although there could be some risks of sharing images and information on social media, but I believe that by uploading our pictures on social media, we can share our moments with family and friends and get in touch with them and also keep them safe and access it from everywhere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the following paragraphs. First of all, by uploading pictures and writing inform...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... now I do not have any images from that period of time. So, if we keep our images on social me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, i feel, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57845433255 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51132280039 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430913348946 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8998017157 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.384615385 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8461538462 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134130133907 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607204619094 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483671421451 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967598218708 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543879076468 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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