Nowadays, decision making is a challenging subject and complexity of the societies and nature of problems made it even worse than before and importance of making decisions should not be neglected. Some people believe that we should make important decisions with getting help from others, while others disagree with this notion by stating that we can make our own decisions. I am of the opinion of the latter. I will elaborate on why I feel this way, in the following paragraphs.
First of all, we should be able to make our own decisions ourselves, because in this way, we can take the responsibilities of our own choices. Moreover, nobody knows us better than ourselves. As a result, we can make the right decisions because we know about our goals and we want to build our own destiny, while others do not know much about us and our dreams. So, they can allure us to choose the wrong path and we will regret after years. For example, when I wanted to choose my own field of study to pursue, everybody told me to study some field and it was confusing. In this situation, I knew that what I want, so I decided to select the field that matches with my interests instead of others. Consequently, after years, I am so happy that I didn’t listen to others and chose my own field of study. I am successful now because I pursued my dreams and not others. Had not chosen my own field, I would not have been so successful and happy with my life.
Second of all, with the advancements of internet and technologies, we can assess the different aspects of options by reading about them on internet and different websites and hear the views of others and then make our own decision. After all, this is our own life and not anybody else, so we should decide what we want to do with our life and destiny. This does not mean that we should select hesitantly and without enough information, instead we should gather and acquire enough and wealth of information from different sources and then make our own decisions. In contrast, if we do not do our research and neglect it, we will not make correct choices, so we should be careful about that. My own story is a good illustration of this. When I wanted to pursue my master degree, I read about the different views and information on the internet and gathered enough data about it and with considering my interest I chose my field of study and I am happy about the consequences.
To put it all in a nutshell, for the aforementioned reasons I believe that we should make our decisions by ourselves, because by doing this not only we can make our own choices and take the responsibilities, but also we can get information from different sources and choose wisely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, after all, for example, i feel, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55967078189 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67767503745 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423868312757 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0667068854 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133938988884 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503792302011 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606361329403 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127950800568 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829879005238 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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