Communication tools are transforming the twenty-first-century social life at lighting speed. To create colorful life in this dynamic environment, people in different fields discuss about a hot topic about whether they should record their own life experiences in social-networking sites through uploading pictures and other things. A large number of individuals stick to not recording due to the privacy. From the opposite perspective, I confirmedly maintain that keeping a record in social network brings continuous advantages.
To begin with, the practice of continued recording helps maintain the relationship with distant friends.Specifically, because of geographical distance with some friends, we are gradually lack of opportunities to communicate with them directly. Clearly, when we upload the pictures about what we do in the daily life, such as participating in some indoor or outdoor activities, exercising in the gym, or presenting our talents in the field of art, it is highly possible that friends downloading the same social software may browse the completed information we record. No one can deny the possibility that they may write something about the feeling in the message board after they notice what we record about our latest life conditions, which means that we can establish a connection with those distant friends.
In addition, supporters have also contended that using social software can acquire more worldwide information so as to widen the horizon. Given the widespread availability of the Internet, our information not only can be seen by familiar people, but also helps to connect with strangers in the same website. That is to say, the pictures and videos on the Internet are performing as a bridge to share distinct or same opinions with other Internet users. What we record may express ideas about the current news in other countries, such as world economic situation, environmental protection, scientific innovation and cultural transmission. New media industry enables us both to present information perfectly and to learn from others about how other local people analyze these professional areas.
Finally, the habit to record our experiences acts as a key to success in future career. Many of us are inclined to keep notes about study and work plan and mark the time when we achieve our goal. Social networking is open to every person including our colleagues, leaders, and even the customers. Undeniably, by remarking the process of how we work hard during the course of projects and share the happiness of achieving the success in completing challenging tasks on the social networking, we can be widely known by leaders and they even highly appreciate us, thus paying more attention to us in the workplace. Eventually, there are numbers of arguments to support that once leaders care more about us, this kind of concern plays a significant role in leading us to gain better job opportunities.
In conclusion, it is widely advocated that posting daily information on social-networking sites can be a profitable method for the Internet users in strengthening the friendship, enriching the knowledge and paving the way to success in working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...gh uploading pictures and other things. A large number of individuals stick to not recording due ...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Specifically
...n the relationship with distant friends.Specifically, because of geographical distance with ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... can acquire more worldwide information so as to widen the horizon. Given the widespread...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...marking the process of how we work hard during the course of projects and share the happiness of ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2695.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36852589641 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17299163357 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56374501992 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4842555242 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.722222222 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22838733518 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722207991588 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607737053493 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12947273268 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778865288573 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.