Some people marry shortly after finishing college. Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married. Which of these situations do you think is better?
people have varying opinions for age of getting married some prefer marrying at a younger age whereas other at older age. personally, I believe that people should marry when their career becomes stagnant. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, delaying marriage to a later time helps the couple become more stable financially. If a couple decides to marriage in their late 20's then there is very good chance that the couple leads a financially stable life, which is good maintaining harmony in their relationship. For example, recently my elder brother got married and he also chose to marry when he became well settled in his career. this made him job secure and also capable to handle his family as well as his wife as now he started earning handsome salary. As a result, my brother was able to buy presents to his wife and take her to outings weekly, which kept them both happy and also created a strong bond in their relationship. therefore, deciding to choose at older age is actually beneficial for the relationship.
Secondly, as the age of person increases, he becomes more mature and shrewd. The increase in the person's acumen is beneficial for the children which he will be going to have after marriage. The presence of much more awareness will make the upbringing of children more secure and healthy for the children and they will become more successful as an adult. I can very well draw this same situation from my own family. my uncle was also the person who decided to marry late and gave first priority to his career as he believed that this will make him more capable for handling children. therefore, when he married at an age of 29 and had his first child at an age of 30, he was well prepared mentally to provide all the adequate care and nourishment which the child require in his tender age. The upbringing which my uncle's son received made him more successful as an adult as he become more disciplined, determined and intelligent in handling situations. Hence, delaying marriage to increase the maturity within oneself is very beneficial for the newly born.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people should give first preference to their career. this is because this makes the couple financially stable to make the relationship share a strong bond and because the increased shrewdness which comes with aging is helpful for the children which a person will have once he marry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78738317757 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55348926969 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2732377014 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.842105263 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137389204667 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519627530328 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545034779231 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11102493723 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516566917839 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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