When it is time to eat, we are in agony between eating outside or inside. Both have advantages. However, I prefer eating food at home. I have three reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, eating inside our home is healthier. I have seen a TV program that shows the dirty side of one restaurant in my country. It was using rotten groceries and some bad ingredients. In addition, it kept its groceries in a wrong way such as vegetables are put into warm areas. After the closing time, the restaurant was not cleaned especially the kitchen well. Not all restaurants are like that, but after I saw this program, I was shocked. I cannot believe the restaurant’s condition of cleanliness that time.
Second, we can save money if we eat in our home instead of outside. Restaurants are almost expensive, even in our village. Furthermore, the amount of food is small. It is not as large as the value that spend on buying food. Hence, it is a waste of money. My situation is a good example. I buy raw ingredients and cook my own food. As a result, everyone can eat my food unlike in restaurant that is so expensive.
Third, it can help us in our future. In the future, we become adult and independent from our parents. We should cook by ourselves. Cooking alone early, is good to live independently. It is a significant point in our future that we can do something by ourselves. For instance, my mother teaches me how to cook these days. Now, I know how to cook basically and I know I can use this when I become adult.
As a result, eating inside is better than eating outside, because there are many benefits about our health, money, and future.
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...ut our health, money, and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54455445545 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67072771843 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2091935807 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.0 100.406767564 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2222222222 20.6045352989 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210375212796 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571319653186 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938150054478 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124777025972 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931185481277 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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