Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Eating is a critical important daily routine for everyone in the world. Some people love to eat meals at restaurants, while others prefer to prepare their own meals at home. Personally, I prefer to eat meals at restaurants. There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, having meals at restaurants could save lots of time. In my country, Taiwan, there are significant choices of restaurants near my home. I just need to think about what kind of the dishes I prefer to eat today. Next, take a seat in the restaurant then I could get my meals. On the other hand, if I prepare the meal by myself at home. First, I need to go to supermarket to buy ingredients that I need for the meals. Second, I have to wash the vegetables, cut the meats and cook it properly. After the meal, I should wash all the dishes I used and clean the dinning table. Eating at the restaurant could save lots of time to do other more important things in life.
Moreover, eating at restaurant could make sure that the food is delicious. The chief who can open a restaurant need to master the cooking skills, so the meals could be extremely delicious when compared with mine. The thing I hate the most is cooking. I can’t make the dishes delicious and always have some troubles during cooking, such as adding to much salt, forget to put oil first and other basic errors. However, I have tried to prepare my own meals at home, but the result didn’t turn out to be good. I almost burned my kitchen and all the meats were overcooked. All of the ingredients tasted horrible which make me feel exhausted and exasperated. After that failure, I determined that I will never ever get into the kitchen again. That’s why I prefer to eat meals at the restaurant.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that eating meals at restaurant is better than preparing and eat food at home. Eating meals at restaurant could not only save more time, but also make sure the food is delicious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56545961003 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51550386927 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4023357553 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2916666667 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9583333333 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409589403921 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122942778172 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128077226964 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295509953566 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998591007925 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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