Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Nowadays, some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. however, in my point of view, I strongly think that getting up early in the morning and starting the day's work is a better option because it is good for the health and It makes people do their works better.
First, getting up early in the morning and starting the day's work is preferable because it is good for the health. If people get up early in the morning, they will not only be able to breathe in the fresh air, but also smell the aroma of a lot of flowers. In addition, they can hear many birds sing in the trees so that they can feel blithe to begin the new day. Besides, they can have time to work out, go jogging, running, talking with their friends about the new day or they can tell jokes with other people. Therefore, it not only makes people healthier but also makes them have more fun and be in a great condition to start their day's work.
Second, I think getting up early in the morning and starting the day's work is the right choice because it makes people do their works better. For example, a few days ago, I had an important test at school, I had studied it for 2 months but I was not confident about that test. At the evening before the test day. in that day, I went to bed early and I got up early in the next day morning. I reviewed all the questions of that exam and I did the test well. When I received the score of the test, I could not believe that it is my test point. That was my best score I had ever done. Thus, I can do my work better, if I get up early in the morning and start the day's work.
Some people think that getting up later in the day and work until late at night fits with their schedules and make them more focused on their works. However, I don not think like that, I assume that working in the early morning can make people more concentrated on their jobs or their works. if people study or work in the early morning, they may not be disturbed by other people. so they can focus on the work.
In conclusion, I feel that getting up early in the morning and starting the day's work is the correct one. I believe this because both my health and my work can be better when I do them in the early morning.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191616766467 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.161676646707 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059880239521 0.0866891130778 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0678642714571 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0998003992016 0.0685040099705 146% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12375249501 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0339321357285 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.00917350343 2.67179642975 75% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0139720558882 0.0309702414327 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0199600798403 0.00188951952338 1056% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0978043912176 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0219560878244 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00399201596806 0.0139019557991 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2304.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 455.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06373626374 5.86048508987 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.2 0.338922669872 59% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.142857142857 0.251872472559 57% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0681318681319 0.174417080927 39% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0285714285714 0.112833075102 25% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.00917350343 2.67179642975 75% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.375824175824 0.524397521467 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.2603701678 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6818181818 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3133968587 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6818181818 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 0.644075263715 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 34.9675324675 45.7405998639 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.06060606061 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543740662988 0.300154397459 181% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195833866406 0.103427244359 189% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.12784601555 0.0752933317313 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564968245296 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14258191209 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252568386883 0.114077575197 221% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178823794351 0.0781384742642 229% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.451940573062 0.336927656856 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0773599814177 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409355733394 0.210909579961 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12555616655 0.0618886996521 203% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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