Some people prefer to live in the country, others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since human beings have been born, always ask themselves this question, Where is a good place to live?. Today, people have a specific struggle to choose over living in the country or big cities. In my opinion, living in the country is much better than big cities.
First, people in the country are more kindly and friendly. They always try to help to each other in critical and essential situations such as building a house and harvesting the agricultural crops. Although they usually are not rich as much as city’s people, they have a warmer behavior not only with their family and neighbors but also with others. As a person that lives in the countryside and family members all live there, but at the same time has to study in a big city, I am able to touch these significant differences behaviors between the people of the country and city.
In addition, weather of country is clearer and healthier than big cities. There are fewer factories, fewer cars and consequently less air pollution in the rural communities. Thus, all of them are the result of good weather in this kind of places and also you are not able to find some type of diseases and illnesses. However, the researches show that in the countryside societies because of good weather and also a healthy lifestyle, people, who live there, live longer than cities’ people.
Fewer Costs of living in the countries provide these regions better for life. Almost, all people because of low price lands, have a house and so do not have to pay money for a rental house monthly. Furthermore, rural regions are small, then people do not need to pay any money for their transportations such as subway, bus and taxi and also they usually can walk easily for reaching to another place in the countryside. As a Persian proverb that says “Smaller house, cheaper life “ we can infer this mean that the result of simpler lifestyle is a better and warmer life.
In summary, although living in big cities have some special consequences, I much prefer to live in the countryside. Who can forget the positive points of rural life like friendly people, better and healthier weather and low cost and choose urban life?
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Suggestion: are usually
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, as to, in addition, in summary, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80158730159 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57331266574 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.893500534 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202295522518 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713059611013 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765703062806 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120897612171 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556352640707 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22 Out of 30
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