Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. which do you prefer?
The place in which any individual lives can undoubtedly have either detrimental or beneficial effects on his or her life. Unlike other life-affecting factors of paramount importance such as nationality, native language, to name but a few, one’s living place can be changed. Between two general options human beings have so as to choose as their living place in today’s world, namely in the city and in the country, I personally prefer the latter due to a number of reasons, the two most important of which are the existence of quite a few facilities and job opportunities.
The city enjoys a large number of various facilities and infrastructures in comparison with in the country such as specialized healthcare facilities, hospitals and clinics; distinguishing educational centers; vibrant recreational centers. This is a disreputable fact that the more facilities exist in the vicinity of human beings, the more convenient are their lives. Therefore, the city provides its inhabitants with conveniences making its dwellers live an efficacious and exited life. For instance, the people in the country have to travel a large distance at least for specialized services requiring specialists and specialized equipment, which squanders their otherwise productive time. Moreover, the importance of accessibility to equipped healthcare facilities surpasses wasting time and money, and having inappropriate access to them can cost people their most invaluable possession, their lives, particularly in emergency situations. The existence of numerous diverse recreational centers is another advantage in the city that creates the apposite environment for spending free time like going to the spacious movie theaters, thus making life exited and amusing. Although the paucity of tranquility is strongly felt in cities owing to high population, traffic congestion, and various kinds of pollution such as air, light, and sound pollution resulting from the high density of facilities in the cities, people can take the advantage of calmness and quietness of rural areas by traveling to these areas at the weekend or on vacation when their spirits need recovery.
One’s job plays an absolutely critical role in one’s life since it is the common source of earning money and facilities one’s life conditions rather than worsens it, even though money might not the only way to be delighted, but rather be one of its important means. By virtue of the extreme variation of corporations, factories, franchises, there are various and excessive job opportunities in the city. On the other hand, most of the jobs existing in the country, for example agriculture and boviculture, are traditional and have the nature which tends to consist of arduous tasks. Furthermore, the modern jobs existing in the rural areas are relatively insufficient in comparison with urban areas on account of the lack of various industries and businesses. Although rural jobs are more healthy than urban sedentary jobs are, they are so arduous that not everyone has a predilection for them. With the passage of time, there are developments in technologies that make online working possible; however, a large percentage of jobs, which usually do not require profound knowledge and are physical, for instance manufacture and service workers, cannot be done away from their workplaces, with the result that online working is not able to have significant effects on the number of rural jobs.
In conclusion, I prefer to live in the city because of the existence of a great number of facilities making life convenient as well as lively and job opportunities playing vital roles in any individual’s life. Despite the fact that the utter elimination of cities’ demerits is unlikely to occur, I wish we could mitigate them with the development of technologies and efficient management techniques over time in order to make cities more desirable places without severe pollution and traffic congestion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n two general options human beings have so as to choose as their living place in today’s...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d job opportunities. The city enjoys a large number of various facilities and infrastructures ...
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Line 7, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evere pollution and traffic congestion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3358.0 1977.66487455 170% => OK
No of words: 621.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40740740741 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05124723049 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 212.727598566 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513687600644 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1080.9 618.680645161 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5274304421 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.555555556 100.406767564 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16040714022 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511764738816 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557201844242 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114172988179 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611947704793 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 11.7677419355 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 58.1214874552 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 183.0 86.8835125448 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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