Some people prefer the quiet life of the country, while others prefer the hustle and bustle of city life. Compare and contrast the two lifestyles. Which do you prefer?
The quiet life of the countryside and the hustle life of the city have a lot of differences and similarities. They can be huge or small ones. Either way, they are different in some way. In my case, I prefer living in the countryside.
Some of the differences between living in the countryside and in a city include the way of living since it is more relaxed and slow pace. Unlike people living in a city they always are in a hurry, and they do not have time to take a small break. A difference of the lack of job opportunities in the countryside, the cost of living is lower than the city. For instance, the cost of a unit apartment of two bedrooms in a city can be the same cost of a big house in the countryside. Another difference between living in the city and the country is the air quality. In the city the air is polluted due to the huge quantities of carbon monoxide that cars, busses, and factories emit every day. However, the country air is fresh and clean. When people inhale this toxic air every day, their health is negatively impacted and in the long run, they develop illnesses such as asthma, heart diseases, etc. Nevertheless, living in the countryside gives people privacy because the houses have located some distance from each other. This is something missing when people live in a city apartment. While it is difficult to get from point A to point B in the city due to traffic congestion, people in the country move faster as there are fewer cars on the road.
Life in the city and the countryside share some common similarities as well. Routine, there is no difference whether a person lives in a city or country they follow a specific routine every day. For instance, many city residents get up early in the morning at the same time to show up at work and return home late in the evening. Similarly, the people who live in the country have similar habits, for example, they might get up early to milk the cows and tend to work until late evening every day. Another special similarity that will never change whether a person is living in the city or the countryside is the value. Values, such as love for one’s family, are what make a person valuable. Both types of people would be willing to help a family member if they are in trouble. Also, they might even share the same faith value as they practice the same religion that can be found in a city as well in the country.
Overall, regardless of the big differences and similarities presented, life in a country is happier and less hustle than in a city. Also, living in the countryside the life is quieter, fulfilling, more rewarding, and pleasant than in the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49275362319 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5392376662 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438923395445 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0881923961 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198955392532 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060924998338 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544771312404 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13779482118 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514341955685 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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