Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Most people decide to travel in a group as they feel secure, while other people prefer to travel alone because they feel free, and also prefer to do the accommodations themselves that suit them better for their journey.
Travel in a group is fun, secure, and affordable. People who like to travel in a group share their memories, experience with others, and love making new friends during the trip. Also, traveling in a group helps people to gain different perspectives whether the trip itself or the interaction with the travelers. Moreover, traveling in a group is beneficial for those people who are afraid to explore new things alone as they would have someone to explore with, someone who shares similar interests and mindset. Another reason to travel in a group is people do not have to deal with the stress of planning anything. The group director planned ahead of time the whole trip, especially when people are traveling to places where they do not speak the language.
On the other hand, people who prefer to travel alone want to expand their comfort zone, want to know themselves better, and also want to discover how much they can relieve themselves. Furthermore, travel alone requires organization, confidence, and independence. Here are a few reasons why people decide to travel alone. To begin with, it is cheaper as they can keep up with their budget since they decide where to stay and what to eat. Next, people find it easy to practice their foreign language, and also it is easy to make decisions. For the given reason I prefer to travel alone.
Traveling alone or with a companion is a unique experience where people learn how to be more self-aware of their surroundings, appreciate their friends and their decisions. Finally, travel is a good way to learn and challenge one’s self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88961038961 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58563079177 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5946100109 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375078752721 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150119362341 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070419192224 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246700863172 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532336987168 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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