Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Travelling is one of the wonderful experiences in life. Nearly everyone has been on the road sometimes due to variable reasons like holiday, business, visiting relatives. However, their attitudes may distinct. Choosing to wander alone or with a companion generally based on personality and lifestyle. some people can prefer going a tour on their own meanwhile others want to share a trip with a friend or family. different characters behave in their unique ways when it's about taking a journey, I'm introverted and sensitive person so according to mine I find the voyage with a friend more joyous, especially if I'm delighted.
First of all, being introvert or extrovert affects the choice of voyage style. Individuals which are more energetic, social, open to communication, friendly, willing to express themselves might rather to go a vacation that surrounded by their loved ones. However, personas who trend to keeping their feeling and thoughts inside; may want to be lonely and in a calm situation.
In addition, the mood is another reason when deciding how to leave. For instance, if I am sad or tired I wish be isolated and in the need of listen my mind during the road. Joyful moments or happiness also could alter my desire. Consideration would be changed by the spontaneous sensations.
Furthermore, particular mindsets value specific options. A live-the-moment based mindset thinks gaining an exclusive experience has better meanings for them in their lives. The options are many for this point of view, every new thing surprises. so they would be happy by sharing these. In contrast, someone just values confidentiality, might pursue only a scheduled trip away the front of eyes.
Essentially, different preferences can occur because of everybody had divergent characteristics. That's why i rather wander with a companion. Some of people avoids being alone while travelling like me. A few people find loneliness more peaceful. Besides that, their current moods and life views could steer the choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95429695302 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674922600619 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2288302239 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9130434783 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0434782609 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195697839442 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494725263214 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713899686963 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970174396898 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967614041471 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.