Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Movies are popular around the world as people feel related to the emotions that movies transmit. Also, through movies, many people have gotten to know parts of the world which they never thought about.
Films are considered the best medium of education and an important part of life. It has been an easy source of entertainment and the visual basis of film gives it the universal power of communication. Moreover, movies are not only entertainment but also, its influence on people. For instance, psychology can recommend watching movies as therapy as watching movies can be an emotional release for those who find it uncomfortable expressing their emotions. Often people who watch movies as therapy find themselves attached to the emotions that the movie is transmitting, and end up whether laughing or crying.
Movies are popular because they are extremely affordable. For example, if a person wants to watch the latest movies, they would go to the nearest Cinema and watch it. Cinema is everywhere in every little town, and the tickets are not expensive. Furthermore, people can watch movies at home. Nevertheless, movies have become popular around the world because they are well made. Directors make sure that movies have wonderful pictures and high-quality music. Also, behind every popular movie is a great history. In addition, histories where the audience is captivated by the chronology events in which the movie is described.
Movies are popular as they communicate cultural or emotional behavior since it is a feasible way to connect with so many people in different ways at once. Movies can inspire people and a popular movie can cultivate people, the basis of life and be more persuasive on their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14234875445 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72016979558 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.691876311 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268509056439 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104234409187 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851085549658 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185774285497 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438414153829 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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