"Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position."
Language is the best interactive communication within the outside world, helping us to share our ideas, thoughts, and feelings with others. Although, many people said that children should enjoy their childhood. However, I agree that children should start learning a foreing language as soon they start school for the following reason:
Initially, the importance of learning a foreing language at an early age is that it gives them a significant advantage for their future life. Additionally, the difference in learning a foreing language for children and adults is that children are less worried to make mistakes while they are learning than the older beginners, and also they are immersed in the multilingual environment, which gives them the edge to learn the foreign language more quickly. Furthermore, it will make children be more efficient to face the globalized world. Children who knows foreing language have wider opportunities in the workforce when they become adults, since most of the companies are working internationally, and they require qualified bilingual candidates.
Next, learning a second language would make children acquire new skills. That would be sustancial for their future career. For instance: they can apply to go to study abroad. As a result, studying abroad would help them to appreciate new cultures, make new friends from all over the world, obtain life experience, overcome challenges of living in other countries and gain a greater understanding of the world. When they finish their studies abroad they would be back home with a new perspective, new skills and willingness to learn. These traits are very attractive to the employees. That is why it is very crucial that everyone is conscious that their children are getting the necessary education to prepare them for a successful future.
All in all, children who are bilingual perform better in their native spoken language, develop better social interaction skills and professional advantages, and also are known to enjoy better life benefits than others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as, thoughts, and feelings with others. Although, many people said that children should ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prepare them for a successful future. All in all, children who are bilingual p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3850931677 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83633389055 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.0045383235 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22484745872 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729812274988 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786325222621 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146536775932 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112801762057 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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