Increased of the sea levels

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Increased of the sea levels

The reading claimed that the rise of sea levels is nothing to be panic about because it is a process that has happened before. Meanwhile, the lecturer opposed it and stated that there is clear evidence without any doubt that the sea level is increasing drastically due to human activities leading to an uncertain future if any action is taken.

According to the reading, polar ice melting is not the major factor in the rise of sea levels. There would not be a drastic change if the ice caps meltdown because 90% is part of the water. The lecturer stated that the melting of ice caps is not taken into account when it comes to studies about the increase of sea levels, however, it causes other problems. Moreover, one of the major concerns is the permafrost which is ice sitting in the land that never melts. When the permafrost unfreezes, the water added is added to the ocean and the increase of sea level occurs.

Furthermore, the reading held that there is still unknown where the additional water comes from, and also claimed that some agencies like NASA have stated that there are uncertainties about this phenomenon as well. The lecturer mentioned that NASA had stated that the rise of sea level is unclear. However, NASA has shown doubtless evidence that the melting of permafrost is constantly swallowing more land. Moreover, the water that is frozen in the permafrost has been underestimated. That is why the extra water is unknown.

The reading stated that episodes of the sea levels have happened ever since the continents emerged and humanity will have enough time to adjust because it will occur at a slow and gradual pace. The lecturer said that the reason why the ice is melting is due to human activity which has increased the hit of the atmosphere, accelerating the pace of ice melting a hundred times faster than it normally would. Furthermore, if humans do not act now, there would be a dramatic change affecting the economy and population.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 340.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52995206268 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6026454386 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06452816374 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305270890101 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103106959818 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116815793769 0.0662205650399 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204668961991 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978948568406 0.0443174109184 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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