How do movies or television influence people’s behaviour? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Watching television or movies is the most popular activity of entertainment in modern society. It has certainly influenced people's behaviour either negatively or positively.
To begin with, in modern society, televisions have a lot of negative consequences. This is mainly because people who often watch television more than 4 hours a day experienced a significant change in their behaviour such as lack of enthusiasm, aggressiveness, and less imagination. The lack of enthusiasm leads people to not care about their diet, appearance, and the levels of their energy drops. This negatively impacts their activities because they feel tired, and also every little thing annoys them and this behaviour is reflected in their job, and also their interactions with their friends, family and so on. Additionally, watching movies or television programs nowadays is very accessible. There are hundreds of websites where it is free and easy to download any type of movie or show. Therefore, setting a balance between Tv hours and active times is vital because it will benefit people’s well-being more than sitting in front of the television all day.
Furthermore, somehow television or movies can inspire people to do what they see, for example, in a movie normally there is always a good and a bad guy. Each one has different characteristics which symbolise real people’s lives. As a result, this kind of perspective makes people do bad or good things unconsciously in the real world. Moreover, television has influenced so much in modern society that it has mostly negatively impacted young adults as a result they formed diverse ideas about the world around them. It influenced how people think about race, gender, culture, and class. Some television programs show the glamorous life of billionaires people, for example, the Kardashian. This kind of film only provides bad perceptions for young adults because it makes them think that to be beautiful is only if they get some surgery done. Consequently, it affects people's behaviour that makes them feel insecure, inadequate and people who suffer from low self-esteem are consistently afraid of making mistakes or letting other people down.
Overall, tv programs for some people are so addictive that they do not know how to control them and unconsciously adopt the pattern to watch television every day. A person's behaviour can be shaped in different ways according to the information it acquires.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28132992327 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95682039926 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544757033248 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3223752808 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.684210526 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234144344798 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811098382915 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506273116773 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162838462435 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368421689063 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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