If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition what would you choose Why Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice

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"If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice."

An exhibition is a space where you can show to the public the potential of your products and promote them for those who lack knowledge about them. Also, it is a great way to learn. If I were invited to an international exhibition, I would exhibit a gastronomic dish such as pupusas.

Pupusas are a typical dish from El Salvador, recently it has been named as national dish which is celebrated Nov 8. In particular, pupusas are made with corn tortilla or rice flour. There are variations of filling that you can use. For instance; meat, fish, cheese, vegetables, refried beans, and any other ingredients that you feel comfortable with. However, the most popular combination is meat and cheese. Normally, pupusas are accompanied by two sides of curtido (a spicy cabbage slaw) and tomato salsa and are eaten by hand. Moreover, pupusas have been a traditional and satisfying dish for a long time. Pupusas represent an important element in the economy of El Salvadort. In fact, for many people in El Salvador, they have become the only source of income for their household. For this reason, I think the pupusas would represent my country on a unique level.

Eating pupusas twice a week, or everyday, is very common in El Salvador, for many reasons. To begin with, they are low cost. You can feed a family of 4 with just $4 or $5 for a meal. Furthermore, they are delicious. Pupusas have such a great taste and it is mouthwatering to watch them be made in a local place. The smell is a pleasure and makes you want to try them.

Being that this a really popular dish among the Salvadorans, it would be important that other nations learn about such a great dish.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, i think, in fact, in particular, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67808219178 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66770050955 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5488822467 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144581824787 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446136541224 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589248535146 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912463635763 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690658852324 0.0645574589148 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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