Some people trust their first impressions about a person s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct Other people do not judge a person s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong Compare and contr

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Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare and contrast these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.

It is commonly said that the first impression is the most important because people are judged on how they present themselves. Some people like to analyse a person a few seconds after they meet, while others like to get to know each other before to conclude. I firmly agree that the first impressions are often wrong!

The character of a person may vary depending on the environment one is found and often first impressions are based on instincts. For instance, for a person who is met in a job setting the first impressions might be different from one meeting at a party. Nevertheless, these traits do not define a person truly. Often these traits are reflected to have control of their emotions and create an atmosphere related to their activities. In a job setting, it is crucial to have a space full of confidence and professionalism to make good contacts and relationships. When I met my best friend, she was in her office. I did not come across that we could end up being friends because one of my first interactions with her my instincts and emotions described her as a serious, unsatisfied and fun killer person. Then, accidentally, one night I went out, and we were in the same bar. Her character was completely different; she was joyful, charismatic, enthusiastic, and happy. Since then, we continuously see each other. As a result, I was wrong from the way I have perceived her before. Consequently, most people think that the first impressions are important, that is why many people have learned new skills to imitate their first approach to have a nice impression which is usually fake.

People make assumptions on the first approach and generally judge others without hesitation. This general judgment might negatively impact people, for example, at my job a new employee was hired. One of my coworkers met him before and started spreading rumours that the new guy was lazy, unfriendly, and rude. All these rumours were only based on his first interaction with the new employee because he believed that the new impressions are usually correct. These actions lead the rest of the group to start making assumptions before even meeting him. Then, I met him, I knew what was the impression he gave to my coworker. However, I kept talking to him and after a few weeks, I realised that my coworker was mistaken. The new employee was anxious and afraid, and he did not do anything the first few days because he didn't know what he was doing. Therefore, making general judgments based on first impressions is generally incorrect.

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Suggestion: didn't
... anything the first few days because he didnt know what he was doing. Therefore, maki...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83027522936 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8096395806 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9197607183 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5652173913 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362695717782 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960615300021 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910500747914 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266820173819 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786151622289 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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