Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
Some people judge other people’s character by first impression while others don’t. I completely agree that to judge a person’s character in the first appearance is more often wrong. It’s because first impression doesn’t reveal someone’s character at all and it’s very superficial way to identify a person. Also, it takes many meeting to judge someone’s character.
Firstly, let’s say you meet a new colleague for the first time. He or she might be wearing some dirty clothes. So, we will assume that this person is always dirty, and therefore make assumptions about her work style and we would decide to stay far from them.But, on the other hand, it is entirely possible that there might be some issue because of which she couldn’t get the new clothes. And from next day, she started wearing nice clothes. In this case, the judgement is very superficial and is very wrong. Later, on you might realise they are extremely careful about organising their work.
Second, It is often been said that time test someone’s character. So, it’s only when we have seen someone in difficult situations or difficult times, we can know their true character. For example, let’s say you met someone and they asked you for some money to pay some bills. One might judge that this person always borrows money. Later, when you meet them again after a month, you might find out that this person worked hard for a month with multiple jobs and is ready to pay you back.
In general, I firmly believe that we should always have few meeting with someone to judge a person’s character. A first impression is always a false impression and doesn’t help in any ways of building a relationship between two human beings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...d we would decide to stay far from them.But, on the other hand, it is entirely poss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07534246575 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81615983912 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1256507467 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1764705882 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383746604764 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128210498278 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119431432249 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24344121169 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144571523767 0.0645574589148 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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