The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University:
A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The claim that reducing the tuition fee to professor's children based on the conducted study in Oceania University.We first need to understand that whether the study considers the other factors of high retention like high salary of professors of Oceania Univ,high number of facilities like research groups,and research related travel,and a good proximity to home.So to claim that retention rate is solely base on the free tuition at university might not be the correct claim.
Also,professors of Oceania University might be paid enough and they are ready to go for paid but quality education for their children.But the Oceania University might be serving both and could be the best institution around.
Now to boast the moral for the professor of Seatown Universities we could instead focus on identifying the factors which are causing the professors to leave.There could be one or many factors.We should identify and rectify them and to have a higher retention rate.May be if the professor are paid well enough with good facilities they are even ready for paid education for their children at Seatown University itself.It could be the case that Seatown is far away from the main city and professors find it really challenging to come here everyday.May be they could be given cab facility or the University might even considering a new campus in the center of the city or town. Once equipped with all these,the Seatown university can attract new professors by proper
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264822134387 0.25644967241 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.169960474308 0.15541462614 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0750988142292 0.0836205057962 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0671936758893 0.0520304965353 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0316205533597 0.0272364105082 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122529644269 0.125424944231 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0513833992095 0.0416121511921 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85014619508 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355731225296 0.026700313972 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102766798419 0.113004496875 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0434782608696 0.0255425247493 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00395256916996 0.0127820249294 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1471.0 2731.13054187 54% => OK
No of words: 240.0 446.07635468 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12916666667 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.57801047555 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.287650121315 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204166666667 0.208842608468 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.135150697306 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85014619508 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 207.018472906 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.469332199767 115% => OK
Word variations: 51.0742446522 52.1807786196 98% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.039408867 20% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 60.0 23.2022227129 259% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 225.630782474 57.7814097925 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 367.75 141.986410481 259% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 23.2022227129 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.724660767414 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.14285714286 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 3.58251231527 475% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 90.0 51.9672348444 173% => OK
Elegance: 1.63235294118 1.8405768891 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485074118208 0.441005458295 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.285920563187 0.135418324435 211% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116612671527 0.0829849096947 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.837546194504 0.58762219726 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.265165848959 0.147661913831 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.311344515121 0.193483328276 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101034678293 0.0970749176394 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360953944319 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0827293676069 0.0774707102158 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35761839316 0.312017818177 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881108856922 0.0698173142475 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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