"We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The recommendation given to the Monarsh books to open a cafe alongside their already famous book store is not convincing enough and is also misrepreseted with facts. The suggestion to close their children section might cause decline in sales and also the national's census inclusion of the province where Monarsh is based is also not provided.
The explained reason for paving the way for the cafe by compromising by closing of the children's book section doesn't have a strong evidence against the latter. There is a good possibility that most of the customers or parents specifically visit the Monarch Books because of their children,who likes coming to the shop for the plethora of option of books for people of all ages and tastes.
The reason of the national census telling the drop in percentage of population under ten opens a lot of questions before accepting it to provide recommendation for closure of children's section. The population of student census might not be a try representative with respect to the province where Monarch Books are based out of.It might be the case that children's at the Monarch's nearby locality are more studious and likes reading books or Monarch Books have a tie up with the nearby schools which might also led to high footfall for younger children.
Lastly,opening the cafe just because another competitor opened it, doesn't justify unless its a near locality competitor and also how well the competitor has been doing after that needs to be answered.The competitor might also be at a different locality let's say in marketplace where people prefer having a coffee shop withing book shop.
To conclude,we need to justify the above questions with exact facts about the location and customer's information,and also competitor's performance after opening the cafe. to even think of recommending a cafe to Monarch Books,who already have a sustainable business since two decades.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'well', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290322580645 0.25644967241 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.145161290323 0.15541462614 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0564516129032 0.0836205057962 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510752688172 0.0520304965353 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188172043011 0.0272364105082 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115591397849 0.125424944231 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0510752688172 0.0416121511921 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23684308991 2.79052419416 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.026700313972 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00537634408602 0.001811407834 297% => OK
Determiners: 0.110215053763 0.113004496875 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134408602151 0.0255425247493 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188172043011 0.0127820249294 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1977.0 2731.13054187 72% => OK
No of words: 312.0 446.07635468 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33653846154 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365384615385 0.378187486979 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294871794872 0.287650121315 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195512820513 0.208842608468 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147435897436 0.135150697306 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23684308991 2.79052419416 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 207.018472906 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.469332199767 115% => OK
Word variations: 56.101996458 52.1807786196 108% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 34.6666666667 23.2022227129 149% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7315319247 57.7814097925 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.666666667 141.986410481 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 23.2022227129 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.724660767414 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.58251231527 279% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 64.1538461538 51.9672348444 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.125 1.8405768891 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272394257764 0.441005458295 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.237009710409 0.135418324435 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0775481266096 0.0829849096947 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.789036154878 0.58762219726 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120565076452 0.147661913831 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138835538095 0.193483328276 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050200808782 0.0970749176394 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360461925067 0.42659136922 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125480419026 0.0774707102158 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167738643602 0.312017818177 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478709034838 0.0698173142475 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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