In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?
I believe that not allowing citizens to smoke in public places and office buildings is a very good rule. It discourages people who smoke from their bad habit,
improves the productivity of all employees in general and encourages healthy public environment.
First, as we all know smoking is a bad habit and it deteriorates the health of the smoker as well as someone who is nearby. We already know, millions of people die from lung cancer every year and smoking is one of the leading causes. Young employees tends to start smoking because of work pressure many times. So many times they take their fellow employees with them
Who don’t smoke to the smoking areas. These innocent people get the smoke and their health gets deteriorated for no reason at all. So by not allowing to smoke in the offices,
All employees stays healthy and can focus on work.
Second, to ban smoking at public places is very beneficial for society. People smoke at various public places like near by bus stops, where many people including women
And kids pass by. These innocent people inhale the smoke and which more easily deteriorates their health. This has a very detrimental affect on our society.
Likewise people smoke outside shopping malls and many other public places. So, their smoke affect many people. It’s very necessary to have rules that no longer allow to smoke at these places
And save our society of young people and women.
Lastly, if we impose fines to the people who smoke at public, it would lead them to understand that their bad habit has a cost.
It might change some people’s mind and they might quit smoking for the good. This will lead to less and less people taking up smoking and will help
Less health problems in the society.
So, it’s very important to eradicate the habit of smoking from our society and government should impose such rules to as many public places as possible.
This would result in a healthy workplace and healthy society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'smoking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: smoking
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...ple smoke at various public places like near by bus stops, where many people including ...
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...stops, where many people including women And kids pass by. These innocent people ...
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...eir health. This has a very detrimental affect on our society. Likewise people smoke o...
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...y detrimental affect on our society. Likewise people smoke outside shopping malls and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, likewise, second, so, well, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95280235988 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36074099411 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489675516224 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4917052571 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.95 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346328996962 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118021052172 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755052574015 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126969165709 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106050463643 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.