Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and exam ples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
I believe that young adults should live with their parents for a longer time as opposed to staying away and far from them. It’s because living with parents helps us develop strong family bond, gain wisdom from parents and help them in their old age.
First, kids might have to go to college and get good education and stay away from the families, but when they start working they should move and live with their parents. First, because if we live outside we will be living with strangers and it’s very difficult to develop feelings with strangers. You would miss your parents at times and at various occasions. So, if people stay with parents they can celebrate small things like going out for a movie or celebrations like birthdays and which helps develop memories. Also, we can be there for our parents in good and bad times. This helps in developing strong family bond and which is more important than just wasting time with strangers.
Second, as kids become adults they don’t have much guidance in life and they have to make big decisions which they have not taken ever in their life. If they live with their family, they can discuss with their parents their problems and because their parents have faced various situations in life they can guide their young adults in various problems.
Lastly, staying with family will help the parents also if they are getting old. As an adult its our responsibility to take care of parents who are no longer young and cannot take care of themselves. Moreover, they might not be able to go to the market for getting daily things. If we live with them we can help on these things and help them live their old age comfortably. If we stay away from them, we will be enjoying our lives but there will be no one to take care of our parents.
In brief, I believe that staying with parents is helpful for all of the family. We can earn learn and be happy by staying with our family rather than living away and with nobody take care for our parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 93, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...so if they are getting old. As an adult its our responsibility to take care of pare...
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Line 17, column 62, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hat staying with parents is helpful for all of the family. We can earn learn and be happy ...
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Line 17, column 179, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...rather than living away and with nobody take care for our parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6295264624 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15078583022 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456824512535 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8398555928 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269607785929 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106032867521 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760467585535 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182534272654 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652862537863 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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