Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
I believe that the the internet provides us with a lot of useful information rather than create much problems. Its because the internet helps individuals gain affordable education, give them more choices in life and develop a better society.
First, because of the internet we have access to the millions of educational resource just one click away. In the past, someone has to go to expensive schools and colleges to gain
The best education. It is no longer a case. Instead, the best education is freely or available at a fraction of the cost. Someone who wants to learn can use this using internet and can use it to solve world’s problems. And educations as we know help solves problems instead of creating them.
Second, with internet everyone gets more choices. People can make their restaurant plans by deciding the best restaurants to go based on customer reviews shared online. They don’t have to experience going to a bad restaurant. Also, with internet, people can commute by booking the nearby available taxis instead of going and waiting outside for hours. Therefore internet helps solve the problems of planning and commuting.
Thirdly, the internet helps connect with our loved one while being away with each other. And we can share information with each other while being away miles away. This leads to a strong human bonds instead of people forgetting each other while staying away from each others.
Lastly, the internet helps people to understand the world better by reading the world news. We can know how are the people being treated worldwide and if there is any place where they are not treated well, everyone in the world can get to know. The power of internet is immense and it had helped topple regimes which are against human rights. I believe that internet plays a big role in solving real world problems. And it can always provides us with information that is beneficial for the growth of intellectual humans being and well developed society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00598802395 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51084634836 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2810718215 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.619047619 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242719903314 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736560592304 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720365579887 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123866889477 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061551773297 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.