Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
this is the technological era and we use the internet as our daily essential things. I am not agree with the idea that, internet doesn't provides the valuable information. Of course it gives a lot of necessary knowledge in our life. In my perspective, I believe that, internet help us to find the meaning of words, it can improve our foreign language skill and academic knowledge too, help us in cooking and it is easy way to find the job as well. I will explore this in following essay.
First, I personally think that, if we don't know about the meaning of some difficult words than we can easily type the words in internet and receive the knowledge about that. my personal example is compelling exam of this. While I prepare for the GRE exam, there was a lot of difficult word and I was no idea about those words. After that I search the meaning of those words then I was totally surprise when internet explaining the meaning of words in my own language. that's why I love the internet.
Second, if we want to learn the foreign language then we can open the you tube channel and watch the video to improve our language skill. Nowadays, I am doing practice for the TOEFL exam by watching the videos on YouTube and it helps me a lot.
Third, I concede that, we can search about our job.
Moreover, it provides us knowledge about our academic course. we can meet the professor in Facebook or twitter and we can discuss about our problems which we don't understand. we can search in google as well. For example: if we want to know about the formula of mathematics than we can type in google (a+b)^2 = ?. then internet gives us the detail knowledge about that.
FInally, if we want to eat some healthy food or sweet or anything which we want to eat but we don't know how to cook them, than we can learn about how to cook in the internet.
Ultimately, in my opinion, I concur that, internet is great material for study, find the job and help us to cook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43611111111 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42155395721 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461111111111 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4350076832 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.85 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906844287014 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376934619557 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500518368754 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467475162029 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336805636707 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.