Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Information is a very important part of our life. With the help of knowledge, we can solve many problems in our life and by gathering the information we can gain knowledge and become valuable to society. Some people believe that the Internet is a great source to get valuable information than it creates problems, others would disagree. In my view, I firmly believe that the Internet is the most reliable source to get knowledge for the following reasons.
To begin with, it will help when we travel to a different country. Your tour would be convenient if you have information about the country which you are visiting. For example, my parents took me for a vacation to the USA for 10 days when I was 15 years old. We visited New York, California, and texas. My dad use to collect information regarding the attraction of those cities before we go there, he used to search on the internet about transportation services, time of the subways and visiting hours of the attraction. He gets all the knowledge about cities before we visit. As a result, we didn't have to waste our time and we did cover many places and had a lot of fun. If he didn't have the internet then he can't get all the schedule and other information about the cities, there might chances that we had to waste a whole day to find the attraction of the city. As we can see, the knowledge we get through the internet is very significant that our travel would be comfortable.
Furthermore, we can solve problems. Many information is available on the internet that we can do our work. For instance, my sister had stomach pain in the middle of the night. I tried to contact the doctor's office but everything was close than I started to search online and I found a lot of information regarding stomach pain like which medication to use, what are the causes, etc. I did give her medication so she was able to sleep throughout the night. If I didn't find information through the internet then she might have to suffer the whole night. This example taught me that knowledge we get from the internet is very valuable.
In summary, many perspectives and viewpoints on these issues exits, I am convinced that the information we get through the internet is reliable. Not only, it will help when we travel to a different country, but also we can solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61445783133 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67683188577 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46265060241 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3595338007 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0454545455 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16326160866 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539505980081 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539832880175 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110282504326 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523520417544 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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