Q. Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice
Fasting is an integral part of Indian culture.People throughout the country observe fast during various religious occasions. I would strongly recommend it to other countries to adopt it. It is my firm belief that it will help the people both in cleansing their body and also spiritually.
First, fasting has so many health benefits. There have been many scientific studies that show that fasting takes less calorie intake, It leads to reduced body weight. Also it promotes blood sugar control and improves metabolism. In Indian culture, it’s also believed that it cleanses your body. From my personal experience, my wife used to do fasting once a week. It helped her control her weight even after having a heavy diet. For this reason, I would recommend fasting to the people who are conscious about their body and would like to try something without compromising a lot on their diet.
Secondly, in Indian culture it is widely believed that by doing fasting, one is devoiding oneself of necessary food and kind of punishing themselves for their sins.Also, it is believed in Hindu culture that our bodies are temples of the lord .Fasting is a great time to remember the spiritual connection we have with our bodies. As India is already quite known for spirituality via yoga and Hindu culture of gods, I believe that people will be able to understand the connection of fasting with spirituality. They would therefore be interested in trying it.
So,based on the above reasons, I would be very proud to introduce this custom of fasting to the people from other countries as I believe it has huge benefits for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96336996337 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66567525748 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8184537424 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183761960468 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066638238341 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823805879494 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13485779753 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819592488271 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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