Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
India is known for its diversity in culture, tradition and food. One of the distinguishing tradition is to serve the guests with food. This is a unique custom that I would like the people of other countries to adopt it.
In India there is famous ancient saying that the way to the heart passes through stomach. It stills hold true. In many parts of the India, there is custom of feeding the guests with delicious food. It is considered to be the symbol of expressing gratitude and respect towards guests. Therefore, many people in India invites their boss / clients for a dinner to win their confidence. This practice is still extant in India and I would like the the other countries to adopt it.
Furthermore, it is a good custom because it helps in strengthening the existing relationships. At least once a year, I often invite my distant relatives and friends for a dinner. We discuss our stories of joy and sorrows which helps to lighten up our mood. People are now a often stressed due to office workload. Therefore, I would recommend people of other countries to adopt this tradition as these kind of get togethers would not ony help to ameliorate mental health and but also strengthen the exisiting relationships or build new ones.
Based on above illustrations, I would highly recommend the people of other countries to adopt the Indian custom of feeding their guests with delicious food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, still, then, therefore, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8132780083 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72583232687 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2334193072 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205607205623 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702479761263 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103668760801 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146401260631 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375402221083 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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