Movies are popular all around the world. In your opinion, why are movies so popular? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Movies are getting popular around the world because they helps us to experience the reel life in most plausible manner.
We all are fond of different kinds of experiences in our life such as romance, thriller or sometimes we even enjoy being a fanatic person. But how we can actually feel these experiences in most realistic manner? Here, the movies of different generes comes to our resuce by enabling us these to feel these kinds of experiences. For example, I love the role of secret agents who obstructs their real identities and protects their mother country from the unwarranted dangers. The movies like "Mission Impossible" which protrays these kind of characters enables us to enjoy the action stories of their lives. Since, the desire of experiencing these kind of feeling is common across the globe, movies are popular all around the world.
Another reason is that these stories appears to be more realistic when we watch the movies instead of reading the strories. Stories of Harry Potter are the examples. When I first read the book, I found this story sounded it to be implausible as it was an arduous task for me to imagine setting described in the book. But, when I watched movie, my opinion regarding the Harry Potter completely changed. I found the story to be more logical and was throughly able to grasp the crux of the story. Therefore, most of the people enjoys watching the movie, it's esteem continued to burgeon.
Lastly, I think that people are better able to grasp the information in more pragmatic manner when they view the movies. Earlier people use to perform the plays on well known traditional stories or subjects. Since, the props and the stages on which artists used to perform plays were limited, people often failed to understand actual grandeur of that historic event. For example, I had watched several plays depicting the life of one of greates Indian King - Shivaji Maharaj. But, I had no idea how big were those battle fields in reality. However, when I watched a movie on his life, I was flabbergasted by bravey and valour. Since, the contents shown in the more are move persuasive as compared to traditional plays and books, people's interest in watching movie grew day by day.
Based on the above illustrated reason, I subscribe to my viewpoint that movies are getting popular day by day all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, lastly, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86104218362 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58672130222 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543424317618 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3707259874 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169480106197 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512641242859 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726933770996 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12346733442 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705902517678 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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