Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Whom would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
There are many dignitaries for whom I would love to build a statue or a monument in their honour. However, If am compelled to choose only one person, it would be Sir Nikolas Tesla.
He was the man who challenged the existing conventional systems and developed the new ones especially in the field of electrical engineering. For an example, he challenged the conventional DC current developed by Thomas Edision by pointing it’s drawback and proposed the usage of AC current instead. Although Tesla’s idea of AC current was not readily accepted by people at that time. However, in the due course of time, people could see the potential of Tesla’s idea and started to implement system working on AC current. Therefore, he deserves an statue as he is the source of inspiration to many millennials who persuades them to think out of the box and thereby come with even better and efficient ideas.
Morever, he was the man of moral , ethics and integrity. He had never chased money or the fame inspite of being such a genius person. I remember one of the Tesla’s incidence wherein Thomas Edison offered him the cheque of 10,000 USD simply to bolster Edison’s idea of DC current which he refuted politely and continued to carry his research. His behavioural ettiquites and moral truly makes him an appropriate candidate deserving a statue or monument in his honour.
Morever, in spite of being a highly recognised scientist of his time, he had always remained attached to his roots by being a humble person. Many university students would go to him with their doubts. He would carefully listen to their doubts and answer their queries. However, many of his efforts weren’t recognised at that time as it was difficult for many scientists to demystefy his research at that time. Thus I feel he has not received the recognization he deserves due to which I would love to build his statue.
As illustarted above, there are many reasons due to which his efforts and contributions should be appreciated. Hence, I would prefer to build Nikolas Tesla’s statue or monument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oposed the usage of AC current instead. Although Tesla’s idea of AC current was not read...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, i feel, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91452991453 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7885964818 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2540942185 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859903260776 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380301586524 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512036531089 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775764480293 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642633728755 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.