Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous
person in your country. Whom would you choose? Use reasons and specific
examples to support your choice.
It is critically important to select a famous person of our country . If I were forced to chose I would definitely raised my voice for that the father of nation named Bangabandu Sheik Mujibur Rahaman. It is my firm belief that this person monument will be best fit due to number of reasons. I will develop this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the father of nation named Bangabandu Sheik Mujibur Rahaman was a great person. His personality was full of honesty, sincerity, patience, good managerial power, hardworking etc. His statue helps our next generation to know and achieve these virtues. His statue teaches us how to get personal freedom , do proper hard work to achieve the goal. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experienced. I remember when few years ago I bought a biography of this great personality and took lesson about the personal freedom and decision making. You see, when I was in junior high school I wanted to join the football team. I was small and had never played much football before but I wanted to try. My father did not think, I would like football very much but he said that if I wanted to do it I could. After three months of football practicing and riding the bench I ended up hating football, because all the kids riding on me and I was not very good at catching and tracking. Even though I hated everything about the football team, I was and still am grateful for taking the decision. It was very important for me to make the decision myself , so I could take responsibility for my own choice. This type of decision making virtue I only learn from the biography of great leader.
Secondly, why I illustrate my specific thought is that this statue give the beauty of the town and many people find their livelihood from this statue. Side by side people especially the student finds inspire their study because he is the core of inspiring hardwork. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. I remember I heard a story from my friend. Few years ago when he completed graduation he wanted to write a book but he failed several times. After that he read the biography of this great leader and he inspired. After that he thought he wrote an indispensible piece of literature that would live on forever. After years of writing he finally figured out that he was not very good at it , but by taking the inspiration from the leader he continued to read write and study. Few years ago he also teaches toefl and after that he some unique ways to complete the book. He told me that if he had not read the biography of this great leader, it would have never possible for him to complete the book. So from this example we can say that this statue helps students and general people to do better in their life.
To sum up, from the light of above reasons I strongly believe that the monument of Bangabandu Sheik Mujibur Rahaman will be great. Because it helps many people and inspire the intellectual society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, still, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 96.0 43.0788530466 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51111111111 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45055353339 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446296296296 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 540.0 20.1344086022 2682% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2436.0 100.406767564 2426% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 540.0 20.6045352989 2621% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 5.45110844103 1413% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083848643229 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083848643229 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611664986905 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262940038549 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 269.8 11.7677419355 2293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -459.7 58.1214874552 -791% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 211.5 10.1575268817 2082% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.36 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 32.58 8.01818996416 406% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 218.0 10.0537634409 2168% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.247311828 576% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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