Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is really a though question whether I find watching a movie or reading book for the second time more interesting than the first time. But, if I am compelled to give single opinion, I would state that I find watching a movie or reading the book for the second time to be boring.
There is hardly any curiosity about storyline when a movie is watched for the second time. About five years back, I had watched a thriller movie “Now you see”. It kept me glued to my seat till the end of the movie as it had good thrilling storyline. However, after few months when I watched the movie again, there is was no curiosity left in me due to which I found the same movie to be boring one. Thus even though the movie had a good IMDB rating, I found it to be gland one when I replayed the movie.
Similarly, many books loses their charm once they are read completely. I was highly fascinated by the Dan Brown’s book “The Origin”. It is a fiction story which is perfectly blended with many of the real incidences and includes many facts due to which makes the story highly plausible. However, the same book couldn’t catch my interest when I read it for the second time.
Furthemore, in majority of the cases, there is no new learning when we read or watch the movie for the second time. Because we are subconciously aware of this fact, we often lose the interest in watching a movie or reading the book once again. On the otherhand, when we read new books or watch a movie for the first time, there is some sort of excitement of knowing the climax of the story which thereby makes the process of reading new book or watching a new movie more enjoyable.
With the above illsutrated reasons, I find watching new movies or reading new books to more interesting rather than watching the same movie or reading the same books for the second time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, similarly, so, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41348973607 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37109060848 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442815249267 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.991013615 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275361292266 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114084318573 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708141517056 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182698614553 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517346780087 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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