Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Has our dependency on parents reduced when it comes to taking decisions? After pondering on this question for a while, I feel that we are now much more independent to take our decision than our precedents were for the reasons elucidated in the following essay.
Firstly, ensuing growth of social networkings has led to the emergence of mutiple options which the youth in past didn't had at that time. As a result, it is now very easier to get opinions for the issues that is bothering us. For an instance, about 25 years back, people would often rely on their parent's opinions whenever they were in dilemma. My personal experience would be an apt example to illustrate my viewpoint. I wanted to purchase a small piece land for starting my new industry. However, intially I was perplexed whether the particular location would be favourable to my business or not. This dilemma was immediately resolved when I found the positive reviews of that location from the localities on social networking websites. I had sense of assurance when I learnt that even the other traders of my field has purchased land in the same viscinity. As illustrated, with the recent of developments of social networking groups, our dependency on parnets has reduced significantly.
Furthemore, with the emergence of special communities, our dependency on parents has been further reduced. About 5 years back, I was suffering from depression. But, fortunately I could find a NGO - "Serenity" which was solely dedicated towards helping the people suffering pscyhological issues. In the earlier days, due to the absence of such helping groups, people had to rely on their parents to share their problems. I joined this commmunity wherein the experts helped me to overcome my pschological issues and boosted my morale.
Lastly, the ensuing changes in social trend has played pivotal role in dimishing our dependenecy on our parents. For example, in the earlier days, parents would often choose their children's career. However, in the new era, parents are considerate enough to let the children choose the career of their own choice. With the plethora of information available along with social independence from parents, young people are now able to make decisions based on their interest and decisions.
Based on above illustrations, I posit that young people are now less dependant on their parents because of emergence of social networking, developement of new communities and changing social social trends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...mutiple options which the youth in past didnt had at that time. As a result, it is no...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pression. But, fortunately I could find a NGO - 'Serenity' which was so...
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
... I posit that young people are now less dependant on their parents because of emergence o...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: social
...opement of new communities and changing social social trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, while, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18114143921 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96058643714 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543424317618 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7461986193 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243586564692 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665550734286 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686366136366 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140233051517 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480861371282 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.