People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life Some read some exercise others work in their gardens What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress Use specific details and examples in your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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"People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer."

Modern life is changing significantly everyday, but it is also increasing people's stress levels. People in modern society have also discovered some effective strategies for dealing with problems and tension. Some people workout, clean their garden and others read.

To begin with, I believe that exercise is one of the most effective ways to alleviate stress. Being healthy improves our health and mood while also helping us from our daily worries. Exercise does wonders in life, however sometimes I feel so busy that I do not have time to fit exercise in my routine. Moreover, when I find myself under stress, I usually go for a run. Running is highly efficient and quickly acts as a stress reliever. It cleans my brain, raises my energy levels and improves my fitness. Furthermore, there are more benefits that come from daily exercise such as decrease of symptoms of depression, grow self-esteem and help me to sleep better. For me, this is a simple and quick way to reduce stress in modern society.

In contrast, some people have found that cleaning the garden is a good way to release stress while I find it boring. When people are under stress, they feel threatened, nervous, their levels of adrenaline increase which alarm the body for an emergency action. Moreover, the best way to let out all these symptoms caused by stress is by working out. If someone decides to work in their garden when all these problems arise, It would take longer for them to release all the stress accumulated, since garding is slow paced. Therefore, they might end up dirty, wet and without liberating any stress.

Reading is another method that modern culture has created but it is not the most successful way to alleviate tension because reading requires deeper concentration. The body is sick sitting from long periods of time at work, and the last thing it wants to do is sit and read. Additionally, when people are stressed, they refuse to accept that they are under stress. Under these circumstances, people just read as a way to avoid facing the real problem and become obsessed with the unreality, which is unhealthy. Furthermore, through their inability to relieve accumulated tension, people experience symptoms such as headache, muscle pain and lower energy. Comparatively, reading develops the opposite impact as working out.

As a result, despite the fact that modern culture has provided a variety of ways for people to escape their problems and stress. I am convinced that working out is the most powerful method because it leaves me feeling energized and concentrated.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88604651163 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49304169552 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509302325581 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 430.0 20.1344086022 2136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2101.0 100.406767564 2092% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 430.0 20.6045352989 2087% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 125.0 5.45110844103 2293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363985938908 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.363985938908 0.076458572812 476% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212250744321 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04409018736 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 216.6 11.7677419355 1841% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -364.97 58.1214874552 -628% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 171.0 10.1575268817 1683% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.49 8.01818996416 355% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 174.0 10.0537634409 1731% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments